Small Stone for October 14, 2011

smooth stoneMidnight cool sieves slowly through the screen door and pools upon the kitchen floor.  A six-legged soul trills a single lovelorn note into the darkness as the wind-surf ebbs and flows across the treeshore.

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3 responses to “Small Stone for October 14, 2011

  1. Wonderfully descriptive. I love the use of words, especially 'treeshore' – so apt, I wish I had thought of it.

  2. How beautiful. I had to read it 3 times. 🙂

  3. Wow, this is great writing, I love your imagery, especially '…the wind-surf ebbs and flows across the treeshore.'I shall have to do lots of catching up here!Carrie… 🙂

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